facebook_02twitter_02RSS_02

Obbi's SketchbookFeaturedHot

Obbi's Sketchbook
Zbrush
Hi everyone
This is my first post on this thread! Here is a new work. I'm working on some sketches and WIPs. Modelling in Zbrush, finished in PS. Hope you like it.
Add to favorites
Other artwork by Nattawat
Random artwork
Obbi's Sketchbook
Stylized female nude
Batchiosaurus Air Colossus
Sweeney Todd - Tim Burton
Recent artwork
Featured artwork
Future Priest
Reginald
Character Designs
Seeker
Juan Acosta 2011
Private Charlie

Editor reviews

 

Impressive first post!

Overall rating: 
 
3.2
Presentation:
 
3.0
Visual Appeal:
 
3.5
Skill Level:
 
3.5
Composition:
 
3.0
Model:
 
4.0
Texture/Shaders:
 
N/A
Lighting/Rendering:
 
3.0
Pose:
 
2.5
Anatomy:
 
3.5
Realism:
 
3.0
adrianc Reviewed by adrianc
May 27, 2011
Top 500 Reviewer
View all my reviews
Report this review
 
Last updated: May 27, 2011
Comments: (0)
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
Impressive first post!

The foundation is there, now let's push it further!
tick_blue
Strong Points:Great attention to details!
exclamation
Weak Points:The cloth hanging off the belt lack 'weights'. Adding subtle underlying of the armor on to the cloth would help add more realism and blend it together a lot better. Try looking at real draping cloth as reference.
recommend
Recommendations:You've got the structure of the 'creature' there. I would now go in
break up the 'symmetry' on the body (example: the head looks too prefect on both left and right).
 


To write a review please register or log in.

User reviews

Average user rating from: 14 user(s)

Overall rating: 
 
3.5
Presentation:
 
3.6   (14)
Visual Appeal:
 
3.9   (14)
Skill Level:
 
4.2   (14)
Composition:
 
3.4   (14)
Model:
 
4.1   (14)
Texture/Shaders:
 
2.1   (5)
Lighting/Rendering:
 
2.7   (9)
Pose:
 
3.1   (12)
Anatomy:
 
4.2   (13)
Realism:
 
3.7   (13)
 

Great work

Overall rating: 
 
1.9
Presentation:
 
2.5
Visual Appeal:
 
2.5
Skill Level:
 
2.5
Composition:
 
0.5
Model:
 
2.5
Texture/Shaders:
 
0.5
Lighting/Rendering:
 
1.0
Pose:
 
1.5
Anatomy:
 
3.0
Realism:
 
2.0
ShamsArt Reviewed by ShamsArt
December 16, 2011
Top 500 Reviewer
View all my reviews
Report this review
 
Comments: (0)
0 of 0 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
Well done !

Nice job !!!

Overall rating: 
 
3.6
Presentation:
 
4.0
Visual Appeal:
 
4.0
Skill Level:
 
4.0
Composition:
 
3.0
Model:
 
4.0
Texture/Shaders:
 
N/A
Lighting/Rendering:
 
N/A
Pose:
 
2.5
Anatomy:
 
N/A
Realism:
 
N/A
0 of 0 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
Exelent work man !

Feedback

Overall rating: 
 
3.5
Presentation:
 
4.0
Visual Appeal:
 
4.0
Skill Level:
 
4.0
Composition:
 
3.5
Model:
 
4.0
Texture/Shaders:
 
2.0
Lighting/Rendering:
 
2.0
Pose:
 
3.0
Anatomy:
 
4.0
Realism:
 
4.0
Morgan Reviewed by Morgan
July 08, 2011
Top 50 Reviewer
View all my reviews
Report this review
 
Comments: (0)
0 of 0 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
Sweet model, love the simple yet strong pose.
very nice anatomy, keep up the good work! :)
tick_blue
Strong Points:Awesome detail.
Great concept.
exclamation
Weak Points:Armour concept.
recommend
Recommendations:The leathery looking mesh hanging from his belt could have used a little more detailing as it stands out from the rest of it's detail as looking a little bland.
The shoulder armour doesn't seem very functional, as soon as he lifts his arm into the hair to belt someone with that mace the first place those spikes will move are 10 inches into his brain.
Looking at the guy he seems like he would be more of a carnivore from the way he has evolved and hunts, some sharper teeth would look good on him.

Great model, just needs a little work on head and boots

Overall rating: 
 
3.2
Presentation:
 
3.0
Visual Appeal:
 
4.0
Skill Level:
 
4.0
Composition:
 
2.5
Model:
 
4.0
Texture/Shaders:
 
N/A
Lighting/Rendering:
 
2.0
Pose:
 
2.0
Anatomy:
 
4.0
Realism:
 
3.0
0 of 0 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
Looks great, a very little amount of work and it will look perfect.
tick_blue
Strong Points:I think the skin is done well, even without textures it looks leathery, anatomy looks realistic. The body looks great.I love the little folds of skin in the armpit area and the visibility of the muscles in the chest
exclamation
Weak Points:The head and boots
recommend
Recommendations:The weakest part of the troll are the Head and the boots. The boots look too rigid to be used and unrealistic. It would be also nice to see a little more asymmetry in them. The head could be a problem because it is straight on to camera, but even then the head seems to not be not as interesting as the rest of the model. I would work on the position and expression of your guys head to give it more interest.

Good

Overall rating: 
 
3.2
Presentation:
 
3.5
Visual Appeal:
 
3.5
Skill Level:
 
3.5
Composition:
 
3.5
Model:
 
4.0
Texture/Shaders:
 
1.0
Lighting/Rendering:
 
1.0
Pose:
 
3.5
Anatomy:
 
4.0
Realism:
 
4.0
0 of 0 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
Good

visceral nightmare

Overall rating: 
 
3.7
Presentation:
 
3.0
Visual Appeal:
 
4.0
Skill Level:
 
4.5
Composition:
 
3.5
Model:
 
4.5
Texture/Shaders:
 
N/A
Lighting/Rendering:
 
N/A
Pose:
 
3.0
Anatomy:
 
3.5
Realism:
 
3.5
johnj Reviewed by johnj
June 23, 2011
Top 500 Reviewer
View all my reviews
Report this review
 
Comments: (0)
0 of 0 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
Wow! Great stuff I will look for more to challenge and inspire.
tick_blue
Strong Points:fantastic girth in the anatomy, really denotes power and soil yourself potential. Love the texture and creative armament!
exclamation
Weak Points:presentation could be a little stronger to compliment the strength of the modeling?
recommend
Recommendations:If I would venture any recommendations it would be add a little more flow to the cloth (pose/sculpt to the "minds-eye" if reality isn't impressive enough), and a little more gravity to the chains on his cod-piece shield and the little skull...

Scarey Dude

Overall rating: 
 
5.0
Presentation:
 
5.0
Visual Appeal:
 
5.0
Skill Level:
 
5.0
Composition:
 
5.0
Model:
 
5.0
Texture/Shaders:
 
N/A
Lighting/Rendering:
 
5.0
Pose:
 
4.5
Anatomy:
 
5.0
Realism:
 
5.0
0 of 0 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
Nice! Would not want to run into this dude in a dark alley!
tick_blue
Strong Points:Anatomy is great! Really like the detail in the armor, accessories, weps - all of it. Well done!
exclamation
Weak Points:Don't see any...

Impressive

Overall rating: 
 
4.3
Presentation:
 
4.5
Visual Appeal:
 
4.5
Skill Level:
 
4.5
Composition:
 
4.0
Model:
 
5.0
Texture/Shaders:
 
N/A
Lighting/Rendering:
 
4.0
Pose:
 
4.0
Anatomy:
 
4.5
Realism:
 
4.0
Karmajf Reviewed by Karmajf
June 09, 2011
Top 50 Reviewer
View all my reviews
Report this review
 
Comments: (0)
0 of 0 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
The attention to detail it's amazing, really enjoy the strong pose.
recommend
Recommendations:Only recommendation really, it's work a bit more on the cloth below the belt. besides that congratulations

Nice work

Overall rating: 
 
4.1
Presentation:
 
3.5
Visual Appeal:
 
4.5
Skill Level:
 
4.5
Composition:
 
3.5
Model:
 
4.5
Texture/Shaders:
 
N/A
Lighting/Rendering:
 
3.0
Pose:
 
3.5
Anatomy:
 
5.0
Realism:
 
4.5
Pacco Reviewed by Pacco
June 01, 2011
Top 50 Reviewer
View all my reviews
Report this review
 
Comments: (0)
0 of 0 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
Hi,

This is a great work ! You have made a really great job on the details of the face and muscules and armor. As it have been said, the cloth doesn't look as it has been pushed as far as the rest of the character. It would also be nice if the character hadn't such a stiff pose. I also hope you'll put some shaders and nice lighting to make you're awesome modeling even more impressive.

Still, these are juste tiny details, you made a really superb work ! Keep it on !
tick_blue
Strong Points:Modelisation, details.
exclamation
Weak Points:Posing.
recommend
Recommendations:Keep on, it´s really cool.

Really Nice

Overall rating: 
 
4.0
Presentation:
 
4.0
Visual Appeal:
 
4.0
Skill Level:
 
4.5
Composition:
 
4.0
Model:
 
4.5
Texture/Shaders:
 
4.5
Lighting/Rendering:
 
3.5
Pose:
 
3.0
Anatomy:
 
4.5
Realism:
 
3.5
0 of 0 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
I really like it, the attention to detail is great! And the facial expression is awesome too.

pretty awsome

Overall rating: 
 
4.4
Presentation:
 
4.0
Visual Appeal:
 
4.0
Skill Level:
 
5.0
Composition:
 
4.0
Model:
 
4.5
Texture/Shaders:
 
N/A
Lighting/Rendering:
 
N/A
Pose:
 
N/A
Anatomy:
 
5.0
Realism:
 
4.0
0 of 0 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
nice work

NICE

Overall rating: 
 
2.6
Presentation:
 
1.0
Visual Appeal:
 
1.5
Skill Level:
 
3.5
Composition:
 
3.0
Model:
 
3.0
Texture/Shaders:
 
2.5
Lighting/Rendering:
 
3.0
Pose:
 
2.0
Anatomy:
 
3.5
Realism:
 
2.5
0 of 0 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
great work man...
tick_blue
Strong Points:anatomy
exclamation
Weak Points:none
recommend
Recommendations:none

Well Done

Overall rating: 
 
4.1
Presentation:
 
4.0
Visual Appeal:
 
5.0
Skill Level:
 
4.5
Composition:
 
3.0
Model:
 
4.0
Texture/Shaders:
 
N/A
Lighting/Rendering:
 
N/A
Pose:
 
4.0
Anatomy:
 
4.5
Realism:
 
4.0
0 of 0 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
Very well done, you really know how to sculpt in my opinion.
tick_blue
Strong Points:I like the details, how you followed the anatomy structure
exclamation
Weak Points:it is not textured

Awesome

Overall rating: 
 
4.0
Presentation:
 
4.0
Visual Appeal:
 
4.5
Skill Level:
 
4.5
Composition:
 
4.0
Model:
 
4.0
Texture/Shaders:
 
N/A
Lighting/Rendering:
 
N/A
Pose:
 
N/A
Anatomy:
 
3.5
Realism:
 
3.5
0 of 0 people found the following review helpful
Comments:
Nicely pulled off. Really great.
tick_blue
Strong Points:Great attention to details.
 
facebook_02twitter_02RSS_02