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This was inspired by Fausto de Martini's Cyber Girl. The story or concept behind this it is a person that is kept alive forever by himself, never to die and alone. The ultmate prison. I animated the face with blendshapes to blink and made a tear fall down when he opens his eyes.
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Nice details!
| Overall rating: | 2.8 | |
| Presentation: | 3.5 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 3.0 | |
| Skill Level: | 3.0 | |
| Composition: | 2.5 | |
| Model: | 4.0 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 3.0 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 2.5 | |
| Pose: | 2.0 | |
| Anatomy: | 2.5 | |
| Realism: | 1.5 |
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Overall a really nice piece! Especially liking all the details in the model.
Strong Points:- Breaking out the passes for greater control.
- Textures on machine bits
- Brain shader
- Textures on machine bits
- Brain shader
Weak Points:- The wrinkles at the edge of the eye are not flowing off the eye lid.
- Tear drop (doesn't look natural coming out sideways and then down).
- The skin shader (feels a bit rubbery but maybe that is the look you are going for?).
- Tear drop (doesn't look natural coming out sideways and then down).
- The skin shader (feels a bit rubbery but maybe that is the look you are going for?).
Recommendations:- Add fine skin pore spec map.
- Refine the wrinkles, they all look similar.
- Add a BG
- Refine the wrinkles, they all look similar.
- Add a BG
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Average user rating from: 6 user(s)
Inspiring Work
| Overall rating: | 3.9 | |
| Presentation: | 4.0 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 5.0 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.0 | |
| Composition: | 3.5 | |
| Model: | 4.0 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 3.5 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 3.5 | |
| Pose: | 4.0 | |
| Anatomy: | 4.0 | |
| Realism: | 3.5 |
Reviewed by XaishanJanuary 26, 2012
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Inspiring work!! And love the passes breakdown!! Great to see how people work. Keep up the good work!
amazing model !
| Overall rating: | 3.8 | |
| Presentation: | 3.5 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 3.5 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.5 | |
| Composition: | 3.5 | |
| Model: | 4.0 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 4.0 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 3.5 | |
| Pose: | 3.5 | |
| Anatomy: | 4.0 | |
| Realism: | 4.0 |
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wonderful work, very rich in detail and realistic. The lighting is a key point that is missing, and the completion of image as well. Congratulations for the work.
Strong Points:modeling, detal, creativity.
Weak Points:light, final render
Recommendations:improve the illumination of the scene to better the model, and improve final render to make more reality and enrich the work.
good work
| Overall rating: | 3.4 | |
| Presentation: | 3.5 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 3.0 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.0 | |
| Composition: | 2.5 | |
| Model: | 4.0 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 3.0 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 3.0 | |
| Pose: | 3.0 | |
| Anatomy: | 4.0 | |
| Realism: | 3.5 |
Reviewed by gunsbinsJuly 28, 2011
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Very nice render man, the details is very good.
good work
| Overall rating: | 4.4 | |
| Presentation: | 4.5 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 4.5 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.5 | |
| Composition: | 5.0 | |
| Model: | 4.5 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 4.5 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 4.5 | |
| Pose: | 4.5 | |
| Anatomy: | 3.5 | |
| Realism: | 4.0 |
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good details out there!
Nice Job!
| Overall rating: | 3.8 | |
| Presentation: | 0.5 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 5.0 | |
| Skill Level: | 0.5 | |
| Composition: | 5.0 | |
| Model: | 4.5 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 4.5 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 5.0 | |
| Pose: | 4.0 | |
| Anatomy: | 5.0 | |
| Realism: | 4.0 |
Reviewed by David CunhaJuly 15, 2011
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Amazing details
Stunning
| Overall rating: | 4.0 | |
| Presentation: | 4.0 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 4.5 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.5 | |
| Composition: | 4.0 | |
| Model: | 4.0 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 3.5 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 3.5 | |
| Pose: | N/A | |
| Anatomy: | N/A | |
| Realism: | N/A |
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I've seen your work posted elsewhere and my thoughts are the same as it was back then: Stunning! A intricate and well thought out piece with not much I could criticise on.
Excellent work!
Excellent work!
Strong Points:the modelling and design are excellent
Weak Points:For the skin shader doesn't work for me and secularity on the Brain is abit to high.
Recommendations:I'd like to see this with a more paler skin tone with some transparency in there.
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Thanks for the review. Paler skin would make more sense.
