Vray Test 001
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Would love to get some feedback on the skin of this guy.
I received Vray a few days ago so I am now trying to figure out how to get a good sss effect. The hat and shirt are just basic stand-in materials for now, but I will start working on them soon as well.
All crits are welcome :)
/Jonas
I received Vray a few days ago so I am now trying to figure out how to get a good sss effect. The hat and shirt are just basic stand-in materials for now, but I will start working on them soon as well.
All crits are welcome :)
/Jonas
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Great start Jonas!
| Overall rating: | 3.8 | |
| Presentation: | 3.0 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 3.5 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.5 | |
| Composition: | 4.0 | |
| Model: | 4.0 | |
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| Lighting/Rendering: | 3.5 | |
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| Anatomy: | 4.0 | |
| Realism: | 4.0 |
Reviewed by AlwynFebruary 10, 2011
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Overall a really nice piece Jonas and I know it's still a WIP. If and when you add the next level of detail he will look awesome.
Strong Points:Pore details around the nose and cheeks is really nice. Skin colour.
Weak Points:Areas of the skin still looks very waxy (around eyes and everything below the nose). The eye whites look flat. Crows feet on the sides of the eyes.
Recommendations:Add some very small vein detail in the eye whites. Having a small spec ping in the eye whites and meniscus really helps sell the shape and wetness of eyes.
Sharpen the crows feet wrinkles, and add deeper forehead wrinkles.
The chin looks very feminine, not sure if you have done this on purpose, but add some stubble pores will help him look more 'manly'.
Sharpen the crows feet wrinkles, and add deeper forehead wrinkles.
The chin looks very feminine, not sure if you have done this on purpose, but add some stubble pores will help him look more 'manly'.
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Awesome!
| Overall rating: | 4.1 | |
| Presentation: | 3.5 | |
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| Lighting/Rendering: | 4.0 | |
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| Anatomy: | 4.5 | |
| Realism: | 4.5 |
Reviewed by MolinderApril 06, 2012
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Really like how the wrinkles deform with the muscles of the face.
Riktigt bra jobbat!
Riktigt bra jobbat!
Awesome man
| Overall rating: | 4.4 | |
| Presentation: | 4.0 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 5.0 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.5 | |
| Composition: | 4.5 | |
| Model: | 4.0 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 5.0 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 4.0 | |
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| Realism: | 4.5 |
Reviewed by aditheartistNovember 08, 2011
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This is called Simply awesome
Stupendous
| Overall rating: | 4.7 | |
| Presentation: | 4.5 | |
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| Skill Level: | 4.5 | |
| Composition: | 4.5 | |
| Model: | 5.0 | |
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| Anatomy: | 4.0 | |
| Realism: | 5.0 |
Reviewed by zirmsJuly 26, 2011
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Great V-Ray test then!
Feedback.
| Overall rating: | 4.2 | |
| Presentation: | 4.5 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 4.5 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.0 | |
| Composition: | 4.0 | |
| Model: | 4.0 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 4.5 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 4.0 | |
| Pose: | 4.0 | |
| Anatomy: | 4.0 | |
| Realism: | 4.0 |
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Love the skin shader, the eyes are flawless! Nice work.
Strong Points:Great attention to detail.
Great skin shader.
Great skin shader.
Weak Points:Sculpt is a little too symmetrical around the eyebrows, cheeks, mouth and chin.
Recommendations:Add a little grime to the skin, it looks too clean and flawless for an old man.
perfect skin !
| Overall rating: | 4.2 | |
| Presentation: | 4.5 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 3.5 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.5 | |
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| Model: | 4.5 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 5.0 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 4.5 | |
| Pose: | 3.5 | |
| Anatomy: | 4.0 | |
| Realism: | 4.0 |
Reviewed by SpeedtouchJuly 05, 2011
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Perfect skin texturing and shading! I'm impressed!
Strong Points:skin, modelling/sculpting, expression
Wow!
| Overall rating: | 4.0 | |
| Presentation: | 4.0 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 4.0 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.0 | |
| Composition: | 4.0 | |
| Model: | 4.0 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 4.0 | |
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| Pose: | 4.0 | |
| Anatomy: | 4.0 | |
| Realism: | 4.0 |
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Superb work man.
Great piece of work overall
| Overall rating: | 3.9 | |
| Presentation: | 4.0 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 4.0 | |
| Skill Level: | 5.0 | |
| Composition: | 2.5 | |
| Model: | 3.0 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 4.5 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 3.5 | |
| Pose: | 5.0 | |
| Anatomy: | 3.5 | |
| Realism: | 4.0 |
Reviewed by zaharidichevJune 15, 2011
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Looks just a tad plasticy or like wax. Just make the shader apear a little more dry. This is a pretty old guy. Huis skin is supposed to be a lot drier that this :) Butt great work overall
Strong Points:the model, the exression on the face
Weak Points:The shader itself Z( not the texture)
Nice!
| Overall rating: | 4.4 | |
| Presentation: | 5.0 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 4.0 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.5 | |
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| Model: | 4.5 | |
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| Anatomy: | 4.5 | |
| Realism: | 4.0 |
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Great work! though I think there are some spots that could be tweaked. I believe The eyes could use some more shininess, they look too dry. also the skin have that wax look. Also I think the lighting could be improved as right now it seems quite uniform.
Great skin work!
| Overall rating: | 3.9 | |
| Presentation: | 4.0 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 4.0 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.0 | |
| Composition: | 4.0 | |
| Model: | 4.0 | |
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| Lighting/Rendering: | 3.5 | |
| Pose: | 3.5 | |
| Anatomy: | 3.5 | |
| Realism: | 4.0 |
Reviewed by eleanorbondJune 07, 2011
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Overall very nice work, loving the skin!
Strong Points:Skin shader is very nice with some nice variety in tone and texture
Weak Points:I miss his eye lashes and eye brows a bit! Also the eyes are too flat looking
Recommendations:I realise this is a WIP but could do with adding a few specular touches to the eyes, especially in the corners, to bring them to life a bit, also better lighting to help shape them more
Loads of Character!
| Overall rating: | 4.1 | |
| Presentation: | 3.5 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 4.0 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.5 | |
| Composition: | 4.0 | |
| Model: | 4.5 | |
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| Lighting/Rendering: | 4.0 | |
| Pose: | 3.5 | |
| Anatomy: | 4.5 | |
| Realism: | 4.0 |
Reviewed by SantisFebruary 23, 2011
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Great to see you taking this guy further, I hope you won't stop here :)
Strong Points:The skin detail and asymmetry adds a lot to the realism of this character.
Weak Points:Some slight asymmetry to the bigger, secondary, forms would give it even more realism.
Recommendations:I think some DOF really would add to this composition, strengthen the focal point even more!
Jonas again !
| Overall rating: | 3.6 | |
| Presentation: | 3.0 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 3.0 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.0 | |
| Composition: | 3.0 | |
| Model: | 4.0 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 4.0 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 4.0 | |
| Pose: | 3.0 | |
| Anatomy: | 4.0 | |
| Realism: | 4.0 |
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Nice picture but not my favourite from you !
Strong Points:The render, textures, anatomy
Weak Points:shader, composition
Recommendations:I think the shader is nice but we can still feel the 3D. Maybe the sss effect is too strong in some part of the head ( mouth, forehead...) you should work a bit more on the SSS depth texture to add less sss on these parts.
I think you it will be better to give him a better pose and a camera angle to give dynamism to this guy...
I think you it will be better to give him a better pose and a camera angle to give dynamism to this guy...
Awesome
| Overall rating: | 4.5 | |
| Presentation: | 3.0 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 4.0 | |
| Skill Level: | 5.0 | |
| Composition: | 4.0 | |
| Model: | 5.0 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 5.0 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 4.0 | |
| Pose: | N/A | |
| Anatomy: | 5.0 | |
| Realism: | 5.0 |
Reviewed by JDPadillaFebruary 11, 2011
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Very nice work!
Strong Points:Strong details, and the skin shader is tweaked very nicely. Well done!
Nice Work!
| Overall rating: | 3.5 | |
| Presentation: | 3.0 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 3.5 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.0 | |
| Composition: | 3.0 | |
| Model: | 4.0 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 4.5 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 3.5 | |
| Pose: | 2.0 | |
| Anatomy: | 4.0 | |
| Realism: | 3.0 |
Reviewed by 2cavalliFebruary 08, 2011
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Really good and real.
Strong Points:eyes blinn, skin displacement, modeling
Weak Points:too simmetrical, lighting
Recommendations:Try too make sss more translucent, maybe you can obtain a better result putting a soft light behind scene. However really good work!
Owner's reply
Thanks for the crit! :) appreciate it. I will work more on breaking the symmetry and hope to post a new update soon.
V-Roy :)
| Overall rating: | 4.3 | |
| Presentation: | 4.5 | |
| Visual Appeal: | 4.0 | |
| Skill Level: | 4.5 | |
| Composition: | 4.0 | |
| Model: | 4.5 | |
| Texture/Shaders: | 5.0 | |
| Lighting/Rendering: | 4.5 | |
| Pose: | 3.5 | |
| Anatomy: | 4.0 | |
| Realism: | 4.5 |
Reviewed by SinzalotFebruary 08, 2011
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Awesome work Jonas, always wanted to get into Vray, looks ace, keep posting matey :)
Strong Points:VERY nice! great skin 'feel' nice eyes. love the skin pores on the nose :)
Weak Points:maybe too symmetrical :/
Recommendations:needs some hairs, and more imperfections.
Owner's reply
Thanks for the crit mate :)
Vray is great! very easy to work with.
Totally agree about needing to break up the symmetry even more, not really sure were I wanna take him yet hehe.. So for now he is only my "test features guy" :D
