Well after some honest criticism form a friend, I decided that my design was severely lacking in expression and style. So I went back to the drawing board and came up with something that had more of what I wanted. I took a few different designs and art pieces I had seen online and kind of fused them together to get something that fit with the story and gave more expression to what I wanted.
Its hard to stop and start over this late in the competition but I believe I need to and I know can get it done, just got work more efficient.